SLS and presentation queries

I failed my RAP dur to failing in SLS. MY examiner comments are as follows:
Research Report
Technical and Professional Skills
1. Understanding of accountancy/business models Pass
2. Application of accountancy/business models Pass
3. Evaluation of information, analysis and conclusions Pass
4. Presentation of project findings Pass
Overall Technical and Professional Skills Pass
Graduate Skills
5. Communication Pass
6. Information gathering and Referencing Pass
7. Information Technology Pass
Overall Graduate Skills Pass
Overall
Research Report Assessment B
Skills & Learning Statement
Graduate Skills
8. Self Reflection Pass
9. Communication Skills (inc Presentation) Fail
Reasons for fail and advice for improvement:
You fail in this section as you have delivered a presentation which contains no information about the performance of your organisations performance against the comparator. As it is essential to do this in the RAP it is also essential to demonstrate the results of your in the presentation.
Skills and Learning Statement assessment Fail
Overall
Overall RAP Result F

Please tell me :
Do I need to include a latest FY in presentation?

And what Files I have to Submitt?

Thank you very much

sorry *discussion

but my Research is passed. How can I use latest information as presentation based on reseach report and my Research report is already pass. Where can i get exact info

You do not need the latest financial statements, as you already passed ur RAP. What the marker meant is that u did not include info concerning the performances of the organisation used against its competitor. What u need to do right now is to include the info you used in ur RAP also in ur presentation. You can present ur ratio in form of graph or table and you do not need to include comments as u can do that verbally during presentation.

Gud luck.

My mentor also belongs to different country but i did not mentioned this in SLS while there is no need to mentioned this. You need to write the details about your meeting not how does this meetings has been set (skype or face to face) and same with the presentation. You need to write what did you learn from presentation like improved communication, body language and blah blah blah..

remember you have to asnwer the question about what did you LEARNED from meetings not how does they was arranged.

Good points @Handsome- as you say the focus should be on learning – what you learned, new skills and how such techniques helped you achieve your objectives etc. What you don’t do is focus on what happened and what you or your mentor did or said. This is supposed to be a self-reflective statement not a diary or witness statement of what took place.

At least 320 words per question. However it is the quality of the self-reflection that matters not the number of words. 500 words of waffle for each question would fail whereas 320 – 650 of decent evaluation should pass.

Please can anyone help me..

I will like to know whether after passing SLS in my first submission I will still need to submit an updated PowerPoint presentation in my subsequent submission of RAP.

Thank you
Please it’s urgent

Thank you

Confused? So am I 🙂 !!!

However I have been told by OBU that either are acceptable (but I think they have dropped the idea of the essay). So no one should worry provided the SLS is packed with self-reflection (not a ‘diary’ of what you and the mentor said and did) – how you were affected and built on your personal strengths and overcame your weaknesses for example it should be fine.

So chill baby, chill! 😀 -and good luck!

A little explanation of the key points that are relevant to the particular slide

Hey!! my SLS words as per MS word count were 2002, I had reduced them but forgot to save the file. So, on the basis of two excessive words will my SLS be failed?