June 15 Q1

Sir in yilandwe Qs, there is a cultural risk written in examiner’s answer that

Imoni Co needs to consider cultural risks associated with setting up a business in Yilandwe. The way of doing business in Yilandwe may be very different and the employees may need substantial training to adapt to Imoni Co’s way of doing business

Sir instead of above if I write following then would it be fine?

Imoni Co needs to consider cultural risk when setting up a business in Yilandwe. These may include cultural issues of different nationalities and doing business in the country and cultural issues within the organization