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1.Evaluation of information, analysis and conclusions Fail

Much of your analysis is too descriptive and is unreferenced, particularly
the ratio reports. It is not enough to state the ratios, you need to be able
to dig deep to provide referenced sources to explain the ratio changes
You are advised to put the business analysis first to provide better
context and support to the financial analysis.
Your conclusions are weak. You cannot leverage strong profitability
indicators – you leverage favourable circumstances to achieve strong
indicators. Your conclusion of business aspects is largely generic, and it
should be written to align with the topic.
I think you would be better advised to follow the outline shown in the
Information pack.

2. Presentation of project findings Fail

I think you would be better advised to follow the outline shown in the
Information pack.

3.nformation gathering and referencing Fail

Limited and / or irrelevant information sources used, or substantially
dependent on a single source.
You need to carry out more research to provide reasons and also provide
many more in text references

Please help

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