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I failed No.3:Evaluation of information, analysis and conclusions. Marker’s comments: “The standard of your work is on the right lines to be successful, but you need to put right certain things to enjoy full success. The analysis would improve if your looked at something rather than just Company and their competitors Annual Reports. This is a good start, but you need to gain a full picture by gathering additional viewpoints on the performance of the two companies to further underline the analysis. Your conclusion would also benefit from picking up your original stated Project Objectives and saying whether they were fully or partially achieved. ”
My project used Porter’s 5 forces and benchmarking as business analysis tools. Can anyone help to explain the marker’s comment more precisely? I planning to use one more model -PESTEL to re-submit my project. Do i need to amend the Part 1 and Part 2 of my RAP to reflect the PESTEL inclusion? eg. Business models used…
Actually I want to put one table showing the sales figure for 3 financial years respectively. And also the revenue growth (%) in the table. Then below the table I will put one chart showing the trend (increase/decrease). Then I worried the numbers in the table will be word counted also.
Hi, I doing topic 8 for resubmission. My first submission word count is 6500. Now increase to 7500. Just would like to know the word count rule still same for T8? Since i will put the numbers in the tables and show the percentage for analysis. Then below the table i will put one chart to show the trend. Will all the numbers like ($100,000) in the table and percentage in the chart counted? Thank you very much for anyone’s advice.
I failed both my RAP and SLS. I cried the whole day since i was so hard working. Even failed my acca exams. I also paid 400 pounds mentoring fee, but still failed. Total three sections failed. Can anyone help me? The marker comment: 3. Evaluation of information, analysis, and conclusions. Reasons for failure: The standard of your work is on the right lines to be successful, but you need to put right certain things to enjoy full success. the analysis would improve if you looked at something rather than just BreadTalk and its competitors annual reports. this is a good start, but you need to gain a full picture by gathering additional viewpoints on the performance of the two companies to further underline the analysis. your conclusion would also benefit from picking up your originally stated Project Objectives and saying whether they were fully or partially achieved.
6. Information gathering and referencing. Reasons:further information gathering would be useful in terms of having the different viewpoints on BreadTalk’s performance. You do use references ratios themselves, but you need reference as stated above to add weight to your analysis.
Could anyone help me to explain? Very very thank you!
AyumiHi! Can anyone help me pls? I will submit my RAP next Tues. Still not sure how to count the words. Question: I use tables and graphs for my ratio analysis. However, below the tables and graphs (outside the table) I used referencing also. Such as” Figure 1.1 Gross Profit Margin for 2011…Source: Appendix A.” Will these be included in word count. Since OBU only mention the words in tables and graphs not counted. But these are outside the tables… Very confusing. Can anyone help me?! Urgent!!! Thanks ahead.