[czp021]

After I read the resubmission guide, I have two more questions.

1. I do not have to use the same mentor for a resubmission, so I can choose another mentor. If I choose another mentor, should I do the PowerPoint Presentation to the new mentor?

2. According to the guide, student need to updated the financial statements for resubmission of topic 8. My RR passed but I SLS failed. Do I need to update the financial statements and recalculate the ratios, then update the ratios to my presentation slides?

Thank you very much.

[czp021]

Hi,

After I read the comments for failed SLS, to ensure I understand it correctly, I have three questions. Also, can you give me some comments? Thanks

Skills & Learning Statement
Graduate Skills
8. Self Reflection Fail
Reasons for fail and advice for improvement:
Q 1 is unfortunately largely descriptive of the events that transpired at the 3 mentor meetings. What you need to do is to look at these events and point out whether either before or after the process you were able to take advantage of strengths you already had or were able to erode possible weaknesses you might otherwise have had by having the 3 meetings. What did you learn? This needs to be the focus. Q 2 you should look at specifically the initial research objectives you outlined of which you had 4 and seek to assess whether you were able to fully meet them in the course of completing your report. This can be both positive and negative points of consideration. It isn’t though enough just to relate what you did without any insights on your part. Here you spoke generally about them and not about the specifics of each of them. Q 3/4 were done to a level that you would pass.

Questions 1: Does this mean that I do not need to change the content of Q3/4? Do I only need to focus on Q1 and Q2?

9. Communication Skills (inc Presentation) Fail
Reasons for fail and advice for improvement:
Your presentation starts with limited indication of what you are trying to investigate as there is no mention of your project objectives and you just launch straight into financial analysis. This means the audience would be confused at the start of the presentation as to what you were actually trying to do. You need to update the presentation to reflect this fact.

Question 2: “You need to update the presentation to reflect this fact.” Does it mean I only need to update and improve the PPT presentation slides, or need to do presentation to mentor again?

When I presented this last time, I have briefed my finding orally at the start but did not add it into the start of PPT slides, as I put all finding on conclusion at the end of PPT slides. I will fix the problem.

Question 3: when I resubmit the SLS, I only need to summit the SLS, Presentation slides and resubmission statement, correct?

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