[Aashi]

Following was my result report. Unfortunately, i couldn’t pass but now i am confused on ratios and conclusion section. Please help…..
Technical and Professional Skills
1. Understanding of accountancy/business models Pass
2. Application of accountancy/business models Pass
3. Evaluation of information, analysis and conclusions Fail

Reasons for fail and advice for improvement:

You have made a good start to your project. However, there are a couple of problems. The work is badly referenced; there are no references in the business model, and very little in the rest of the report. Without referencing, your work cannot be differentiated from the work of others. Please check your understanding of ratio analysis. You should be researching the reasons why ratios have changed. For instance, you use ‘could be’ and ‘indication’ when discussing the reasons for changes in ratios, e.g. the debt to equity ratio. Also, would the currency loss be connected with the debt/equity ratio?

4. Presentation of project findings Fail

Reasons for fail and advice for improvement:

Please consider breaking the analysis and conclusion into more paragraphs, this would make the work more reader friendly.

Overall Technical and Professional Skills Fail
Graduate Skills
5. Communication Pass
6. Information gathering and Referencing Fail

Reasons for fail and advice for improvement:

As advised above you need to reference more your sources and you need additional sources to provide the level of research required.

7. Information Technology Pass
Overall Graduate Skills Fail
Overall
Research Report Assessment F

Now another question from this result is that do i need to work on ratios, references and conclusion sections only leaving rest of report as it is or do i need to work on business analysis (SWOT/PESTEL analysis) section also?

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